雅思写作犯罪类词汇盘点

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篇1:雅思写作犯罪类词汇盘点

雅思中犯罪类话题词汇

1.先来说说犯罪份子该如何表达

criminals 名词,罪犯(值得注意的是,该词有形容词性)。

offenders 名词,罪犯,违法者。

convicts 名词,罪犯,囚徒(前段时间很红的一套书《囚徒健身》,“Convict Conditioning”)。

culprits 名词,犯人。同时,本词可以指的是被指控犯罪的人。

outlaws 名词,罪犯,_。也有动词词性,并且为及物动词,译为宣布某事为不合法。

suspect (criminal suspect)名词,犯罪嫌疑人。其实,在法庭最终宣判之前,我们口中的罪犯多数情况下应该用这个词表达,更为严谨。

prisoner 名词,犯人,囚犯。

juvenile criminals 名词,青少年罪犯。

minor criminals 名词,未成年罪犯。

juvenile delinquent / juvenile offender 名词,少年犯,或行为不端的青少年

值得注意的是,其实在雅思写作犯罪类的话题中,未成年人犯罪往往是常见话题。因此后面几个词汇,需要大家重点掌握。

2.来说说犯罪这件事该如何表达,要注意词性标注

commit a crime (commit crimes) 动宾,犯罪

violate the law / break the law 动宾,犯罪,违法

offend against the law 动宾,违法

violent crimes / non-violent crimes 形容词+名词,暴力犯罪/非暴力犯罪

delinquent behaviors / illegal acts / lawless behaviors形容词+名词,不法的行为

juvenile delinquency 名词,特指青少年的不法行为

illegality 名词,泛指所有违法行为。此外,immorality 名词,指的是不道德的行为,其实近似于违法行为,但是略有区别。同理,副词illegally和immorally也是类似的区别

wrongdoing / misconduct / delinquency 名词,都是指的是行为不端

雅思中犯罪类话题词汇资料

今天内容是讲解关于犯罪类话题的常用词汇,目的在于帮助学生提升对于“犯罪类”这一比较生僻话题的词语表达能力。

一般来说,写作分数在5-5.5分的学生在面对有关犯罪的话题时会觉得无话可说,无从下笔,除了对于这类话题的思路不了解不熟悉以外,一些特殊的话题词汇的匮乏对于他们来说也是巨大的挑战。例如如果没有词汇,在今年3月3日的考试中,有的学生会写:Prison is important, as it will make people dare not to do bad things。这样的句子显然是不能满足写作LR中6分对于词汇多样性的要求。

在基础词汇的补充方面,除了认识新词,学生最好能够尝试把已知词语进行词性变化,这样可以更有效率的记住更多词汇。例如罪犯的表达是criminals,那么学生可以把犯罪的动词表达一并记住:commit crimes;类似的例子是offenders, law breakers对应commit offences(美式拼写offenses)和break laws。可见,扩充词汇的方式不要局限于背诵新词,要优先考虑在已有词汇的基础上进行变化。

犯罪类话题经常谈论“威慑力”,英文表达是deter,可以说某种措施可能会威慑犯罪或者罪犯:may deter crime或者deter criminals。还可以对威慑力的产生进行进一步的说明,加上原因状语从句as the fear of sth might/may prevent people from committing crimes。犯罪类常用的话题还包括“青少年重罪犯是否要和成年人一样量刑”,或者“更长的刑期是否可以减少犯罪率”,这些话题都能从以上基础词汇和威慑力的论证角度进行拓展。

雅思写作语言素材积累:犯罪类

Sending criminals to prison is not the effective method to deal with them. Education and job training should be used instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 将犯罪分子送进监狱不是有效的方式解决犯罪,我们应该给他们提供接受教育和工作培训的机会,是否认同?

11月8日雅思写作题目解析:

1. 周围的环境引起犯罪:贫困;择业难;校园暴力;枪支泛滥等

2. 本性就是坏人:人性本恶,有人天生就是注定犯罪的

薛鹏解析:两种观点讨论;必须支持给出的一方观点。

两种观点讨论布局图:

首段:背景介绍(个性开篇)+争议焦点(淡化模板)+ 作家立场(清晰表达)

二段:正方观点的展开(三点展开,细节例证支持)

三段:反方观点展开(二点展开,他人口吻,细节例证支持)

尾段:再次亮明观点 + (总结理由)

作家观点:支持犯罪是由于贫困和社会环境引起的。

思路拓展:

贫困和社会问题导致犯罪 = 外因引起犯罪:

1. 贫困的家庭孩子没有受到良好教育,不能明辨是非,容易被引入迷途。

2. 科技发展,传媒多元,色情暴力节目的传播,毒害心灵,误导人生观,诱发犯罪冲动。

3. 枪支泛滥,为犯罪提供了便利,例如,在一些西方国家,枪支买卖合法。

人性本恶=内因引起犯罪:

1. 有人认为,人性本恶,嫉妒,贪婪,自私,都是人的固有本质,一旦在后天被激发,没有正确的引导,会导致一些反社会行为的发展。

2. 例如,女性经济犯罪;黑社会大哥的惯性犯罪,报复社会,诅咒和憎恨他们认为不公平的社会。

薛鹏原创范文赏析:

首段:背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场

Alarmingly, various stories concerning crimes have been pushing into spotlight. Conflicting ideas clash in finding out the root causes of misdeeds. My stand is that external reasons have a bigger influence on those misconducts. Nobody is born to be a criminal.

薛鹏点评:淡化模板;观点鲜明。

薛鹏解析:

1. various stories 公众新闻报道

2. concerning 关于

3. have been pushing into spotlight …… 成为关注的焦点

4. conflicting ideas clash in …… 矛盾的观点在……方面互相碰撞

解析:clash v碰撞

二段:正方三个观点的展开:

My arguments could be easily explored. One contributing factor triggering manifold malefactions could be owed to the external circumstances in which the one is raised. To put in details, in some poverty-stricken or violent families, children are usually not properly taken care of and they stand few chances of receiving fine education, it is likely that such children may easily be led astray and even worse, they may conduct some anti-social offences. Still, pornographic or otherwise vulgar forms of media, have a really adverse impact on the young because the young can, in most cases, find it rather difficult to make positive choices about the types of influences in their lives, thus,it is possible for them to turn to a life of crime. Last, many perilous products that could be harnessed commit crimes are very easily and cheaply available to the youths. In fact, guns are sold in a number of stores in some countries. This fact alone makes it very easy for some people to embark on the criminal road.

三段:反方二个观点的展开

Granted, some people might remain suspicious of my stand and believe that those perpetrators are born to be evil. Some people argue that habitual malefaction is the main root cause of high crime rate. As for those felons such as gangsters boss or professional blackguards, to break the law is to take revenge on the society which they think unfair. Besides, some people contend that such is human nature to be greedy, selfish and jealous, which accounts for many types of crimes. It is also found that some women commit economic crimes simply because they are more vain and avaricious than others.

薛鹏解析:

1. habitual malefaction 惯性犯罪

2. felons 重罪人

3. gangsters boss or professional blackguards 黑帮大哥和职业流氓

4. take revenge on the society which they think unfair 报复认为不公平的社会

5. vain and avaricious 虚荣的贪婪的

尾段:再次亮明观点 + 总结理由

In a nutshell, I re-affirm my stand that different crimes could be combination of various elements, however, in comparison with evil nature, external factors actually play a profound influence in leading some immature or inexperienced people to go astray.

薛鹏全文点评:本文依然保持小鹏哥原创范文的高质量,符合雅思写作评分各项标准,建议背诵精彩词汇句法。

类似提问角度:

The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion? 有人认为:父母工作,无暇照顾孩子,导致少年发展,是否同意?

薛鹏原创语料库:

1. juvenile crime = adolescent crime青少年犯罪

2. teenage crime = juvenile delinquency青少年犯罪

3. young offenders = teenage criminals = young law-breakers 少年犯

4. embark on the criminal road 走上犯罪道路

5. turn to a life of crime 开始罪恶的人生

6. conduct some anti-social offenses 做出反社会行为

7. commit crime = violate the law 犯罪

8. domestic violence = family violence家庭暴力

9. pornographic or bloody contents色情的血腥的内容

解析:porno (色情)+ graph(记录)+ic (…… 的) = pornographic 色情的

10. blindly model after sth 盲目效仿

11. to be led astray被引入歧途

12. Some criminalities can be owed to the disadvantaged family background such as poverty, violence or parental divorce. 不良的家庭成长环境,例如贫困,暴力和父母离异。

13. According to the statistics, the rate of youth crime is in proportion to that of divorce rate. 少年犯罪率和离婚率成正比。

解析:is in proportion to 成正比

14. An environment of poverty, violence and fear. Such a growing environment often results in low self-esteem and other growth-related concerns. 较低的自尊心和一些成长相关的问题。

解析:self-esteem 自尊

15. It is also found that some women commit economic crimes simply because they are more vain and avaricious than others. 人们发现,有些女性进行经济犯罪,仅仅是因为她们比其他人更加的虚荣和贪婪而已。

雅思写作大作文犯罪类高分范文

It is shown that many criminals have a low level of education. Some people argue that the best way to reduce crime is to educate criminals in prison to help them find jobs when they leave prison. Do you agree or disagree?

题目分析:

题目类型:犯罪类

提问方式:同意与否类

Crime from the juvenile to the adults, obviously, has become an serious social problem, which cannot be ignored. Gradually, more people focus on the future of criminal released from the prison, and believe that to provide them educational opportunities does help the reduction of crime; as for me, I am an advocate of this idea.

As the major reason of high crime rate in today's society, low education level has been blamed. People without receiving enough education would be attempted easily, and do not have the equal and excellent skills to compete with others when looking for a job; besides, lacking sufficient moral knowledge to distinguish right from wrong contributes to go astray on their way to pursue the goals. It is worth providing the prisoners, especially committing minor crimes, with education opportunities before free, which not only can give them another chance to learn some practical skills and accumulate certain knowledge to find a job and start again after the sentence, but also decline the risk that they would turn to crime again.

On the other hand, educational opportunities in prison cannot be the universal solution of all the problems the prisoners face. The huge life pressure and the attitude from other citizens could lead them to go back to the old lifestyle, or even cause more serious problems to both the society and the individuals financially and mentally. However, no one can doubt the function of education as the basic mean to provide people and the society a brighter future; thus, though education cannot solve all the problems at once, it is necessary for a long time.

In conclusion, in spite of many causes in high crime rate, our society should realize the importance of education, and give all the criminals the second chance to do something right and have a better development in the future life.

篇2:雅思犯罪类写作

相似题目:Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same way as adults by authorities.To what extent do you agree or disagree?(犯罪.04.25)

In some countries,a high proportion of criminal acts as committed by teenagers.Why has this happened?What can be done to deal with this?(犯罪2015.06.18)

Many people do not feel safe at home or they are out.What are the causes and what can be done to make people feel safe?(犯罪2015.06.27)

People are afraid to leave their homes for fear of crimes. Some people believe that more action should be taken to prevent crimes while others think that little could be done. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.(犯罪2015.09.3)

高分范文题目:Children are committing more crimes. What are the causes of the phenomenon? How should they be punished?

写作提纲:

Reasons:

1 economic pressure, parents busy with work

2 small family

3 pressure from parents and from school as well

How to punish them:

1 deprive of freedom

2 work for local community

范文:

Youth crime contributes significantly to the increasing crime rate in the modern society. There is no doubt that these young delinquents take their punishment, but I prefer in different ways.

The reasons for this phenomenon are worth of scrutiny. In China with the economy booming, pressure from competition at work and business force parents to work hard, leaving insufficient time to their children. Without enough love from the family, these adolescents tend to do something astounding, sometimes slip beyond control. In addition, the one child policy in my country also contributes to higher crime rate because these little “emperors” are brought up in such a way that some of them are self-centered and tolerant of little. When confronted with difficulties or injustice, they are prone to resort to violence. Although spoiled, they have to live up to the high expectation of their parents in the name of love. Under such pressure from the family and school as well, they tend to be rebellious to their parents and teachers, in some cases the society as a whole.

When teenagers commit crimes, surely penalty should be given, especially the youth who commit serious crimes such as homicide or rape. No one should be excluded from justice, and justice has to be served. Depriving criminals of their freedom by imprisoning them, no matter how old they are, is the most effective measure to prevent crime and protect the lawful civilians in the society. Violent teenagers are as dangerous as their mature counterparts, hence should be put behind bars until they are no longer a threat to the public security.

On the other hand, most teenager crimes are minor, like vandalism, fighting or theft which does not do serious harm to victims. The immature behave in an illegal but less violent manner mostly for fun, or to show their courage to impress their peers or to attract their busy parents’ eyes. In these cases, they should be given some opportunities to be corrected and eventually come back to the right track rather than being judged as adults who commit crime deliberately with full awareness of the consequences of their conduct. Instead of being jailed, young lawbreakers can be forced to repair the damage to their neighborhood or local community, and offer their sincere apology to the victims or do some community duties such as serving the elderly in local nursing home.

To sum up, I personally reckon that political policy and the utilitarianism of educators should be responsible for today’s increasing juvenile delinquency. I agree with harsh treatment under the circumstances of serious crime. But if the offence is not major, adolescent criminals should be given alternative punishments like community service in order to reform them to be lawful citizens rather than being jailed.

雅思写作范文:恐惧犯罪

Task:Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of their fear of crimes. Some people believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Sample answer:

With a rapid increase of crime, more citizens are scared of aggressive acts all over the world. As to whether more measures can be taken to stop crime, there is an endless debate. From my personal view, although more actions cannot fully guarantee the security of the whole society, it is not the reason for which people can surrender to violence.

Clearly, actions such as enacting more strict laws and legislation can effectively curb the frequency of crime. Fearing punishment is usually the mature of humans, so when they are informed of the consequence of committing crimes, they are more prone to stop doing anti-social acts. In addition, providing more education contributes to raise people’s safety awareness and consequently prevents crime. As the Internet prevails information about laws and legislation are more achievable, and thus there is a possibility that people are given more opportunities to learn how to distinguish right from wrong.

However, feasible measures are still not a panacea to the establishment of a completely safe society. If governments fail to guarantee a basic living standard for their citizens, crime rate will hardly be controlled. It is widely believed that a decent job and sufficient disposable income can reduce the possibility of committing socially unacceptable behaviour. The insecurity of society can also be attributed to the fact that it is less possible for governments to eradicate all factors leading to crime. Illegal drugs and alcohol are more accessible than before. People may have to commit crimes in order to get these items.

To conclude, reasonable actions including making severe policies and offering educations are of great help to control criminal events. However, they may still not be able to ensure a secure living environment for people if fundamental needs of materials cannot be fulfilled.

(296 words)

雅思写作范文:青少年犯罪

Task:Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same way as adults by authorities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sample answer:

It is sometimes argued that young lawbreakers should be tried as adults for crimes. I personally believe that this is partly reasonable.

On the one hand, those who participate in violent crimes should not be treated differently than adult offenders. This is because most crimes, such as rape or murder, are thoughtful, deliberate and cunning in its planning and execution. If our courts trend toward a more lenientposition, then the related laws and punishment will not have a deterring effect on teenagers. As a result, teenagers are likely to commit horrible crimes since they are aware that they have legal protection. What’s worse, these teens might recommit after they are released from jails. In some cases, the lighter sentencing might also lead to resentment towards the judicial system as victims might argue that these young offenders do not confess what they have done. This could also result in insecurity in our society eventually.

On the other hand, the circumstances of a crime and its motivation should be taken into consideration when it comes to juvenile delinquency. For example, because of distress and hunger, some teens may turn to stealing food or robbery during a period of famine. Under this circumstance, harsh punishment, such as long-term jail might not be the best solution. In my view, most of the young offenders lack parenting and self-discipline, which would mean that other alternatives, such as community service and rehabilitation might be better alternatives for them.

In conclusion, I feel that it is vitally important for judges and state legislators to ensure the justice equality regardless of the criminal’s age.

(268 words)

雅思写作范文:罪犯的教育意义

Task:Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students about the danger of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sample answer:

A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to become law-abiding citizens. While some people claim that those ex-prisoners are the best teachers to raise the awareness regarding laws, I believe that other measures are equally effective.

Obviously, ex-prisoners play a vital role in cutting youth crime. This is because those released prisoners have witnessed the horrors happened in the jail and they may also experience some of them. At the same time, they can share the tears and sorrows they suffered in the jails and the harm they have brought to the victims and their family members. This is more impressive than the traditional lectures given by professors. By listening to a wide range of real cases in person, young generation will realize the consequence of the irresponsible behavior deeply and discipline themselves strictly in the future.

Nevertheless, I believe other alternatives should be taken into consideration as well. It is common for people to have a fear towards criminals, especially those who have committed violent crimes and therefore face-to-face conversation between the young and people with a criminal record might be inappropriate in some cases. By contrast, policemen normally have a good impression among youngsters and they can become the active voice in reducing juvenile delinquency. Apart from them, parents can certainly be the first to help children learn the differences between right and wrong since they are the people who know their children best in the world.

In my opinion, it is the responsibility of every member of a society to help the young generation to become good citizens.

(276 words)

雅思写作范文:青少年犯罪率提升

Task:In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. Why has this happened? What can be done to deal with this?

Sample answer:

In recent years, the proportion of crimes committed by teenagers has increased dramatically and this has caused a widespread discussion. Media violence and unstable family life may be the two main factors leading to adolescents’ criminal tendency. Both of them will be discussed in detail below, followed by solutions.

The lack of family life should take responsibility for juvenile delinquency. Most parents educate their children in an impropriate way like beating and abusing. Even now, may parents still hold a view that a good son is a product of the rod. This educational method will leave children a misleading impression about violence when they are very young, and they are more likely to become real offenders in the future. To solve this problem, parents should adjust parenting at home, interacting with their children more frequently and giving more attention and care especially emotional needs.

Excessive exposure to media violence also plays a big role in the increase of youth crime. As we all know, the violence shots are prevalent in many films and TV games, which affects young people the most. Teenagers who lack self-discipline tend to imitate their fantasy hero’s criminal behavior after watching action films in real situations. Actually, these teenagers are misled by their heroes. In this case, the government should set a rating and censorship system in order to control the amount of violence, threat and horror on screen.

In conclusion, family life and media violence are main triggers of juvenile delinquency. Parents should transform their ways to care and educate their children. Meanwhile, governments should provide a healthy environment on the screen.

(267 words)

雅思写作范文:青少年罪犯是否该判刑

Task:Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

思路解析:

1. 应该,严肃的法律能起到一种威慑作用,让青少年们不敢再次犯罪。举例,今天我们对于青少年罪犯的法律惩罚实在是不痛不痒,甚至是太仁慈了,这让年轻人藐视法律,他们会想,即使犯罪也没什么大不。所以像成年人那样惩罚他们很必要,比如说关监狱,而不是简单地口头教导。这些痛苦的惩罚让年轻人不敢随便挑战社会法规。

2. 然而,年轻人的司法体系应该更加灵活一些,这是因为年轻人很年轻,不成熟,他们的犯罪动机很可能不是那么邪恶。举例,成年罪犯的抢劫动机很明确,就是通过袭击他人来获取财富。相比之下,青少年伤害他人的行为很可能只是因为来自同伴的压力,或是因为一时冲动。考虑到他们并不是有意要犯罪,所以给他们较轻的判罚是可以理解的。

参考范文:

Should young criminals be punished on the same level of adults, as some people argue? Personally, I agree with is assertion partially, while it underestimates the importance of a flexible judgment on youngsters.

The main reason of using the same standard to punish the youth is, it deters them from further crimes. Today, the main cause of juvenile crimes increasing is a lenient juvenile judicial system and milder punishments like lighter sentences, shortened prison terms, or even probation. Youngsters think they can always get off easily, regardless the seriousness of crimes. Therefore, it is necessary for juvenile offenders to be tried as strictly as adults, which lets these youngsters know that they are not exempt from heavy penalties, and not given any special consideration because of their age factor. By this way, their desires of making illegal activities would be inhibited.

However, to a large extent, juvenile judicial system should be flexible. Psychologically speaking, youngsters under the age of 18 are immature, with less social experience and concepts about social rules, or with no recognition about the consequence. In many cases, young criminals have no idea that what they do is illegal. For example, compared with adult criminals who have the definite plans and goals to make money by hunting or killing victims, the testimony of many teenage thieves and robbers proves that their movements are purposeless, and the main reasons for them to do so are no more than peer pressure and impulsiveness. Therefore, when it comes to the fact that adult criminals are intentional but young ones are unintentional, it is reasonable to treat and trial them differently.

In conclusion, a flexible juvenile judicial system should be encouraged. Although a strict punishment to young offenders as adults might be a profound education for young generations, sentences on young offenders should be lighter, considering the fact that their intentions of breaking law are fundamentally different from that of adults.

(320 words)

篇3:雅思犯罪类写作解析

In many parts of the world, people who have violated the law are put into prison, which is a very effective way of preventing them committing more crimes. However, many experts believe that better education is probably an even more effective way of addressing the problem of crime. I would suggest that both prison and education are important and each plays a different role in crime control.

在世界上许多地方,违反法律的人被投入监狱,这是防止他们犯罪的一种非常有效的方式。然而,许多专家认为,更好的教育可能是解决犯罪问题的一种更有效的方式。我认为,监狱和教育都是重要的,而且在犯罪控制方面都扮演着不同的角色。

Prison is certainly a place where criminals can be made to understand what wrong they have done to other people and why what they have done before is not socially acceptable. In this way, these criminals will have a better chance to come back to normal life. On top of the remedial function, prison can serve as a deterrent for those with an inclination to crime. The likelihood of losing freedom in prison can most effectively stop them from doing harms to the society and other individuals.

监狱当然是一个罪犯可以被用来理解他们对其他人做了什么错事的地方,为什么他们以前做过的事情在社会上是不可接受的。通过这种方式,这些罪犯将有更大的机会回归正常生活。除了补救功能,监狱还可以作为对犯罪倾向的威慑。在监狱中失去自由的可能性最有效地阻止了他们对社会和其他个人的伤害。

Better education can also bring down the overall crime rate in any community, and it is the most desirable preventive measure against crime. To start with, education improves people’s moral standards which enable them to tell right from wrong so that they will build a robust inner wall against any antisocial behaviors. More importantly, people with better education are always able to find a satisfying career that will reward them with a decent life, and they will never think of committing any crime.

更好的教育也能降低任何社区的犯罪率,这是预防犯罪的最可取的预防措施。首先,教育改善了人们的道德标准,使他们能够辨别是非,从而建立起一套坚固的内墙来对抗任何反社会行为。更重要的是,受过良好教育的人总能找到一份满意的工作,能给他们体面的生活,而且他们永远不会想到犯罪。

In conclusion, prison with its remedial and deterrent function and education with its preventive function are both needed in order to make this world a safer place for all of us to live in.(273 words)

总之,监狱具有矫正和威慑功能,教育具有预防功能,这是为了使这个世界成为我们所有人生活的更安全的地方。

雅思写作高分语料:

1. violate the law 违法;犯法

2. Address the problem of... 解决......问题

3. Come back to normal life 回到正常生活

4. On top of 除了......

5. Remedial 挽救的;补救的

6. Deterrent 威慑(的)

7. Bring down 降低

8. Preventive 预防的

9. Robust 牢固的

10. Antisocial 反社会的

11. Reward 回报(n.& v.)

A类雅思写作真题解析-需要更多措施防止犯罪

观点类大作文犯罪类话题

Many people are afraid of leaving house because of crime. Some think more action should be taken to prevent crime, but others think little can be done. What is your view?(题目来源:9月3日大陆雅思大作文)

题目大意

很多人因为犯罪害怕出门。一些人认为应该采取更多的措施来阻止犯罪,然而其他人认为犯罪无法阻止。问你的观点。

写作思路

这道题目是一道犯罪类话题的题目。犯罪类话题是雅思考试的高频题目,基本上每年必考个四五次。这道题目出题的角度有点怪,说的是害怕出门。当然了,作为生活在天朝的子民来说,这种话有点可笑,但是好在只是背景,不是问题本身。问题是能否有措施有效地阻止犯罪。个人认为当然是可以的。如果我们啥都不做,犯罪只会越来越多。文章就从几个方面入手介绍犯罪阻止的方法,所以这道题目其实是一道罗列观点型题目。

审题,找出敏感词/限定词

Action,限定词,measure等

Prevent,限定词,deter,cease,halt等

篇4:雅思犯罪类写作解析

An ongoing topic of debate in traffic safety world has been whether the age for driving should be raised or not. Typically, the legal age to drive alone needs to be 17 or so, but there is a proposal, underpinned by some groups.

It is fairly hard to imagine that home has become the only place of safety in modern society, where residents are worried about various kinds of crimes, street robbery, car theft and even shooting. This is obligation of the government to protect the civil life and work, which, I think, could be classified into three aspects.

First, deterring potential crimes is considered as a direct way to improve living environment for residents. Some strict laws and regulations should be imposed on specific crime cases. For example, prolonging the term of imprisonment could be an effective way to deter crimes, like theft and robbery. Also, lowering the minimum crime age on punishment is another solution to ordinary crimes because younger criminals are liable to escape from punishments.

Second, the high rate of crimes is derived partly from the widening gap of living in cities. Therefore, creating more job opportunities after investing in manufactures and public services could, to some degree, bring about stable incomes. Reduction in the number of the homeless and unemployed contributes to decline in the level of social chaos and conflicts. When everyone is satisfied with the company they work for and the salary they are paid, there may be no need for them to risk committing crimes.

Third, popularity of primary and secondary education or opening more technical schools is an urgent task. People who live in slums with minimum education more probably commit crimes than those with decent education and comparatively higher social status. Therefore, the level of education reflects living condition and public security in communities, which for a long term is regarded as the foundation of civilized society.

In conclusion, there are plenty of solutions to crimes and social problems, which depend on effectiveness of activities and continuous efforts from both government and individuals.

相关词汇

Street robbery街道抢劫

Car theft 偷车

Obligation责任

Classify分类

Deter震慑

Be imposed on强加于

Prolong延长

Imprisonment关监狱

Be liable to 易于做某事

Be derived from 由 而产生

Social chaos社会混乱

Conflict冲突

Slum贫民窟

Decent体面的

Comparatively相对而言地

雅思写作do you agree or disagree范文解读:社会责任犯罪题材

“是否同意”类文章是雅思写作大作文常见题型,平时注意积累词汇,短语对写作帮助非常大,以207月25日大作文真题为例,讲解如何写“社会责任”题材文章,希望对大家有帮助!

Task:

同题型文章回顾:年1月31日真题

示范写作大纲:

引导段:说明企业越来越多的社会现象,表明企业除了赚取利润还应承担社会责任的观点

主体段一:说明企业需要承担社会责任的第一个理由:很多家庭无法支付教育费用,无法获得教育就业的机会。

主体段二:说明企业需要承担社会责任的第二个理由:为社会贡献可以带来更多的企业利润。

主体段三:说明企业需要承担社会责任的弊端:影响企业运作和发展,严重可能会导致企业破产。

总结段:总结自己的观点。

示范写作:

语料:

vocabulary:bankruptcy welfare enterprise charity generation law-abiding citizen

Work/Life Balance

It is important to achieve a balance between work time and leisure or family time

Too much work can result in stress and poor health

“workaholics” may neglect their families and friends

People need to take regular holidays

Companies should be expect employees to work overtime

Nowadays, many people work part-time or have flexible working hours

Technology allow people to work from home

Many companies provide childcare facilities

A good work/ life balance can raise job satisfaction

Happy, healthy workers are more productive

雅思作文高分范文-青少年重罪犯是否应该判成年人的刑

雅思写作题目:Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

雅思写作高分范文:关于年轻罪犯刑罚的话题及其解题思路

雅思写作范文:

Crimes can be detestable, while minor offenders and their crimes are from time to time treated with leniency. Thus, some argue that laws should not discriminate, and equally punish minor criminals—an opinion that this essay is against.

犯罪可以是可憎的,而未成年犯及其犯罪则往往是宽大处理。因此,有人认为法律不应该歧视和平等惩罚未成年罪犯这篇文章反对的观点。

To begin with, minors are yet to approach their maturity, and their crimes, albeit serious, should be punished with the consideration of their young age. Internationally speaking, countries might define the start of adulthood differently—18 being the most common—but they commonly believe that there is adistinction between minor crimes and adult crimes. Minors are likely to be given a better chance for rehabilitation when they commit crimes because of their inexperience of life and possibly better life prospects. In that case, milder punishments are inflicted on juvenile delinquents: lesser sentencing and relatively less harsh correction facilities are introduced in their cases.

首先,未成年人尚未成熟,他们的罪行,虽然严重,应该考虑到他们的年轻。从国际上讲,各国对成年期开始的定义可能有所不同,18是最常见的,但它们通常认为轻微犯罪和成年犯罪之间有区别。未成年人在犯罪时,由于缺乏生活经验,可能还有更好的生活前景,他们可能得到更好的康复机会。在那种情况下,对青少年罪犯的惩罚比较轻:在他们的案件中引入较少的量刑和相对较不严厉的矫正设施。

Moreover, considering the correction process, minor offenders should not be punished equally as adult criminals. Despite the above-mentioned arguments that are in young offenders’ defense, crimes, especially felonies by minors, deserve heavy punishment to deter crimes and reduce the harm of those crimes to the society. However, sending minors to adult prison might entail unexpectedly negative results. First, minors are naturally closer to more sophisticated criminals and crimes, which aggravate juvenile delinquency. Second, when in adult correctional facilities, young criminals might be threatened by assaults by adult prisoners, mostly sexually, which is nowhere closer to the purpose of rehabilitation.

此外,考虑到矫正程序,未成年犯不应受到成年罪犯的同等惩罚。尽管有上述论点在青少年犯罪者的辩护中,但犯罪,特别是未成年人的重罪,应该受到严厉的惩罚,以阻止犯罪,减少这些犯罪对社会的伤害。然而,将未成年人送入成人监狱可能会带来意想不到的负面结果。首先,未成年人更接近更复杂的犯罪和犯罪,这加重了青少年犯罪。第二,在成人教养机构中,年轻罪犯可能受到成年犯人的攻击,主要是性侵犯,这与康复目的相去甚远。

In sum, law breakers, be they minors or not, should be punished for their wrongdoings, but lesser sentences and special correctional facilities might be more reasonable and helpful.

总之,无论违法者是否是未成年人,都应该因他们的过错受到惩罚,但是更轻的刑罚和特殊的惩戒设施可能更合理,更有帮助。

雅思犯罪类作文思路解析

首先我们来看一下关于犯罪类写作话题有哪些,主要有分析犯罪的原因,青少年犯罪问题以及如何降低犯罪。话题题目如下:

The news about violent crimes may frighten people or, on contrary, encourage them to commit a crime. Therefore, some believe that these types of news should not be reported in newspapers or on TV. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. What are the causes? How should these young criminals be punished?

In many countries crime is increasing. What are the main reasons for this? What can be done to improve the situation?

下面我们就一一分析一下。

首先:关于犯罪的成因。

无论是青少年犯罪或者成年人犯罪,首先应该想到的是经济问题,经济问题会影响社会的稳定,如失业率的提升,失学、食物匮乏、家庭负担加重甚至破产,这时就会滋生犯罪。而贫穷落后地区的儿童往往面临失学问题,也是造成青少年犯罪的重要原因。

由经济层面进入教育层面,大部分暴力犯罪者的受教育程度比较低,他们因为贫穷过早的进入社会,或者失业导致流落街头,这类人群冲动易怒,易发生冲突。

心理健康问题,这是比较容易忽略的问题。校园暴力者本身会存在心理问题,甚至场景是校园暴力,家庭暴力的受害者。

这里有一些特殊的犯罪比如网络诈骗、经济犯罪这些则是其他原因,要单独说。由于信息技术发达,个人信息安全遭到窃取,给网络诈骗可乘之机。还有就是一些机构腐败滋生。高科技犯罪者本身的受教育程度可能很高,智商也高,这时候我们要转换思路,这类高科技犯罪背后的原因是法律意识淡薄。

犯罪情节由轻到重包括:校园暴力、盗窃、杀人,经济犯罪、网络诈骗等。近年来青少年犯罪的相关新闻比较多见,建议考生多关注相关报道,新闻中会给出相关的事件分析。

分析完成因,后面就要考虑如何降低犯罪,按照情节的严重程度做不同的处理。

情节轻微的,小惩小戒,情节严重者就要毫不留情的处罚,甚至拘禁。

面对青少年犯罪,对于情节较轻的一般采取纠正引导。情节严重的如盗窃、伤人,那么就需要采取一定处罚措施,情节严重到伤人的,则应该依法采取措施。有严重暴力倾向,反人类的行为的青少年,建议采取心理治理和法律约束。同时对被害人也需要进行心理治疗。

然而预防青少年犯罪才是从根本上减少或降低犯罪伤害的有效措施。来自学校,管教所和家庭的教育很重要。最后,为了避免再次误入歧途,视情况为青少年罪犯提供必要的帮助和就业指导等。

最后,如何有效地降低犯罪或抑制犯罪,当然是提高就业率和加强国家的安全意识。

关于反复犯罪,并不能完全依靠监狱解决,监狱能关住的只有严重暴力倾向的罪犯,而大部分初犯者,他们的人生还很长,需要社会的重新接纳。

篇5:雅思写作犯罪类话题素材

1.先来说说犯罪份子该如何表达

criminals 名词,罪犯(值得注意的是,该词有形容词性)。

offenders 名词,罪犯,违法者。

convicts 名词,罪犯,囚徒(前段时间很红的一套书《囚徒健身》,“Convict Conditioning”)。

culprits 名词,犯人。同时,本词可以指的是被指控犯罪的人。

outlaws 名词,罪犯,_。也有动词词性,并且为及物动词,译为宣布某事为不合法。

suspect (criminal suspect)名词,犯罪嫌疑人。其实,在法庭最终宣判之前,我们口中的罪犯多数情况下应该用这个词表达,更为严谨。

prisoner 名词,犯人,囚犯。

juvenile criminals 名词,青少年罪犯。

minor criminals 名词,未成年罪犯。

juvenile delinquent / juvenile offender 名词,少年犯,或行为不端的青少年

值得注意的是,其实在雅思写作犯罪类的话题中,未成年人犯罪往往是常见话题。因此后面几个词汇,需要大家重点掌握。

2.来说说犯罪这件事该如何表达,要注意词性标注

commit a crime (commit crimes) 动宾,犯罪

violate the law / break the law 动宾,犯罪,违法

offend against the law 动宾,违法

violent crimes / non-violent crimes 形容词+名词,暴力犯罪/非暴力犯罪

delinquent behaviors / illegal acts / lawless behaviors形容词+名词,不法的行为

juvenile delinquency 名词,特指青少年的不法行为

illegality 名词,泛指所有违法行为。此外,immorality 名词,指的是不道德的行为,其实近似于违法行为,但是略有区别。同理,副词illegally和immorally也是类似的区别

wrongdoing / misconduct / delinquency 名词,都是指的是行为不端

篇6:雅思写作犯罪类话题素材

glorify violence 美化暴力(及物动词glorify的后面通常跟暴力、犯罪、反社会行为等,

常用于网络、电子游戏或媒体类话题)

例句:Frequent exposure to films and video games that glorify violence encourages children to behave aggressively(有攻击性地).

详解:【近义】glorify crime and anti-social behavior (主语是电影、电视节目、电子游戏等)

美化犯罪和反社会行为

【相关】is / are addicted to violent games 对暴力的游戏上瘾(名词短语Internet addiction

和video game addiction 则是分别指网瘾和电玩瘾)

【相关】be exposed to violence or sexual images (主语是人物)接触到暴力或者色情画

【反义】control violent content in entertainment media(主语是政府)控制娱乐媒体中的

暴力内容

托福犯罪类话题写作类型

1.先来说说犯罪份子该如何表达

criminals 名词,罪犯(值得注意的是,该词有形容词性)。

offenders 名词,罪犯,违法者。

convicts 名词,罪犯,囚徒(前段时间很红的一套书《囚徒健身》,“Convict Conditioning”)。

culprits 名词,犯人。同时,本词可以指的是被指控犯罪的人。

outlaws 名词,罪犯,_。也有动词词性,并且为及物动词,译为宣布某事为不合法。

suspect (criminal suspect)名词,犯罪嫌疑人。其实,在法庭最终宣判之前,我们口中的罪犯多数情况下应该用这个词表达,更为严谨。

prisoner 名词,犯人,囚犯。

juvenile criminals 名词,青少年罪犯。

minor criminals 名词,未成年罪犯。

juvenile delinquent / juvenile offender 名词,少年犯,或行为不端的青少年

值得注意的是,其实在雅思写作犯罪类的话题中,未成年人犯罪往往是常见话题。因此后面几个词汇,需要大家重点掌握。

2. 来说说犯罪这件事该如何表达,要注意词性标注commit a crime (commit crimes) 动宾,犯罪

violate the law / break the law 动宾,犯罪,违法

offend against the law 动宾,违法

violent crimes / non-violent crimes 形容词+名词,暴力犯罪/非暴力犯罪

delinquent behaviors / illegal acts / lawless behaviors形容词+名词,不法的行为

juvenile delinquency 名词,特指青少年的不法行为

illegality 名词,泛指所有违法行为。此外,immorality 名词,指的是不道德的行为,其实近似于违法行为,但是略有区别。同理,副词illegally和immorally也是类似的区别

wrongdoing / misconduct / delinquency 名词,都是指的是行为不端

请见如下例文:(青少年违法之后应该如何被惩罚永远是雅思考试的常见话题)

There is no denying that everyone should be punished due to his/her illegality, no matter how old he/she is. Notwithstanding, this does not imply that juvenile culprits should be treated as equally as adult prisoners. Juvenile detentions ought to be the place for those minor offenders instead of common jails, and besides juvenile suspects should be on trial in juvenile court where their right can be protected much better.

Juvenile convicts with violent crimes should be detained in juvenile detentions as they might be potential threats to our society, and on the other hand minor culprits with non-violent crimes can be punished with more flexibility such as being forced to do social work.

PS:Juvenile detentions 名词,少管所

juvenile court 名词,未成年人法庭

detain 及物动词,羁押

3.犯罪率的表达方式

Crime rate / incident of crime

如何降低犯罪率,是经常在雅思写作中被讨论的话题。

Unbelievably high juvenile crime rate is plaguing many countries all over the world, and how to reduce it has become prime task for those governments for a long time.

4.rehabilitate criminals / reform criminals 动宾,改造罪犯

Main function of prisons is not only punishing culprits with locking them up but also rehabilitating them as everyone no matter what he/she has done deserves a second chance. 监狱的功能不仅是限制犯人的自由,还要给这些犯人提供一个改过自新的机会。

雅思写作语言素材积累:犯罪类

Sending criminals to prison is not the effective method to deal with them. Education and job training should be used instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 将犯罪分子送进监狱不是有效的方式解决犯罪,我们应该给他们提供接受教育和工作培训的机会,是否认同?

11月8日雅思写作题目解析:

1. 周围的环境引起犯罪:贫困;择业难;校园暴力;枪支泛滥等

2. 本性就是坏人:人性本恶,有人天生就是注定犯罪的

薛鹏解析:两种观点讨论;必须支持给出的一方观点。

两种观点讨论布局图:

首段:背景介绍(个性开篇)+争议焦点(淡化模板)+ 作家立场(清晰表达)

二段:正方观点的展开(三点展开,细节例证支持)

三段:反方观点展开(二点展开,他人口吻,细节例证支持)

尾段:再次亮明观点 + (总结理由)

作家观点:支持犯罪是由于贫困和社会环境引起的。

思路拓展:

贫困和社会问题导致犯罪 = 外因引起犯罪:

1. 贫困的家庭孩子没有受到良好教育,不能明辨是非,容易被引入迷途。

2. 科技发展,传媒多元,色情暴力节目的传播,毒害心灵,误导人生观,诱发犯罪冲动。

3. 枪支泛滥,为犯罪提供了便利,例如,在一些西方国家,枪支买卖合法。

人性本恶=内因引起犯罪:

1. 有人认为,人性本恶,嫉妒,贪婪,自私,都是人的固有本质,一旦在后天被激发,没有正确的引导,会导致一些反社会行为的发展。

2. 例如,女性经济犯罪;黑社会大哥的惯性犯罪,报复社会,诅咒和憎恨他们认为不公平的社会。

薛鹏原创范文赏析:

首段:背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场

Alarmingly, various stories concerning crimes have been pushing into spotlight. Conflicting ideas clash in finding out the root causes of misdeeds. My stand is that external reasons have a bigger influence on those misconducts. Nobody is born to be a criminal.

薛鹏点评:淡化模板;观点鲜明。

薛鹏解析:

1. various stories 公众新闻报道

2. concerning 关于

3. have been pushing into spotlight …… 成为关注的焦点

4. conflicting ideas clash in …… 矛盾的观点在……方面互相碰撞

解析:clash v碰撞

二段:正方三个观点的展开:

My arguments could be easily explored. One contributing factor triggering manifold malefactions could be owed to the external circumstances in which the one is raised. To put in details, in some poverty-stricken or violent families, children are usually not properly taken care of and they stand few chances of receiving fine education, it is likely that such children may easily be led astray and even worse, they may conduct some anti-social offences. Still, pornographic or otherwise vulgar forms of media, have a really adverse impact on the young because the young can, in most cases, find it rather difficult to make positive choices about the types of influences in their lives, thus,it is possible for them to turn to a life of crime. Last, many perilous products that could be harnessed commit crimes are very easily and cheaply available to the youths. In fact, guns are sold in a number of stores in some countries. This fact alone makes it very easy for some people to embark on the criminal road.

三段:反方二个观点的展开

Granted, some people might remain suspicious of my stand and believe that those perpetrators are born to be evil. Some people argue that habitual malefaction is the main root cause of high crime rate. As for those felons such as gangsters boss or professional blackguards, to break the law is to take revenge on the society which they think unfair. Besides, some people contend that such is human nature to be greedy, selfish and jealous, which accounts for many types of crimes. It is also found that some women commit economic crimes simply because they are more vain and avaricious than others.

薛鹏解析:

1. habitual malefaction 惯性犯罪

2. felons 重罪人

3. gangsters boss or professional blackguards 黑帮大哥和职业流氓

4. take revenge on the society which they think unfair 报复认为不公平的社会

5. vain and avaricious 虚荣的贪婪的

尾段:再次亮明观点 + 总结理由

In a nutshell, I re-affirm my stand that different crimes could be combination of various elements, however, in comparison with evil nature, external factors actually play a profound influence in leading some immature or inexperienced people to go astray.

薛鹏全文点评:本文依然保持小鹏哥原创范文的高质量,符合雅思写作评分各项标准,建议背诵精彩词汇句法。

类似提问角度:

The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion? 有人认为:父母工作,无暇照顾孩子,导致少年发展,是否同意?

薛鹏原创语料库:

1. juvenile crime = adolescent crime青少年犯罪

2. teenage crime = juvenile delinquency青少年犯罪

3. young offenders = teenage criminals = young law-breakers 少年犯

4. embark on the criminal road 走上犯罪道路

5. turn to a life of crime 开始罪恶的人生

6. conduct some anti-social offenses 做出反社会行为

7. commit crime = violate the law 犯罪

8. domestic violence = family violence家庭暴力

9. pornographic or bloody contents色情的血腥的内容

解析:porno (色情)+ graph(记录)+ic (…… 的) = pornographic 色情的

10. blindly model after sth 盲目效仿

11. to be led astray被引入歧途

12. Some criminalities can be owed to the disadvantaged family background such as poverty, violence or parental divorce. 不良的家庭成长环境,例如贫困,暴力和父母离异。

13. According to the statistics, the rate of youth crime is in proportion to that of divorce rate. 少年犯罪率和离婚率成正比。

解析:is in proportion to 成正比

14. An environment of poverty, violence and fear. Such a growing environment often results in low self-esteem and other growth-related concerns. 较低的自尊心和一些成长相关的问题。

解析:self-esteem 自尊

15. It is also found that some women commit economic crimes simply because they are more vain and avaricious than others. 人们发现,有些女性进行经济犯罪,仅仅是因为她们比其他人更加的虚荣和贪婪而已。

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